I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
In literacy this week Grandpa's great escape have been doing fact's and animation's about the moon Me, Levi and Matangi have created a slide show showing a animation and facts about the moon.
Hi Matangi I like how you, Cruz and Levi made the moon evolving. I like how you show facts and showed me how the moon evolves. I like the moon and the sun going around in circles then the sun goes away. I like it because you showed great work.
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Hi Matangi I like how you, Cruz and Levi made the moon evolving. I like how you show facts and showed me how the moon evolves. I like the moon and the sun going around in circles then the sun goes away. I like it because you showed great work.
ReplyDeleteI raelly love these facts about the moon but there is a mistake it says orbits the earth not to orbit the earth
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