I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Matangi Divontae here from South Hornby school. I like this bog post but maybe next time put some more would you rathers. I remeber when i did this. But any ways godd job. :)
Hi Matangi I'm Mark. I like how you did your Would You Rather Story, But maybe you should put somewhere not dark and put more space for the words so we can see the words clearly. I like how you worked hard as well.
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Hi Matangi Divontae here from South Hornby school. I like this bog post but maybe next time put some more would you rathers. I remeber when i did this. But any ways godd job. :)
ReplyDeleteHi Matangi I'm Mark. I like how you did your Would You Rather Story, But maybe you should put somewhere not dark and put more space for the words so we can see the words clearly. I like how you worked hard as well.
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